Thank you for the feedback! The first sentence came to me while I was stuck in traffic and simply had to be committed to paper before I forgot it.
begun on that same rainwashed day==>I like this image of Horatio's entrance into Archie's life being a baptism of sorts
And there you are being cleverer than I was. I just liked the idea of Archie invoking the start of their relationship all those years ago and seeing it as a decisive point in his life. But the baptism idea is neat, if coincidental. :)
That last line is interesting, too, as a reminder that even making it to the next morning is a fight that Archie's undertaking for Horatio.
Precisely. And at the risk of being obnoxiously self-referential, may I point out that Bush certainly agrees with you. Last line of my "Revelation" fic.
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Date: 2005-09-09 02:19 pm (UTC)Thank you for the feedback! The first sentence came to me while I was stuck in traffic and simply had to be committed to paper before I forgot it.
begun on that same rainwashed day==>I like this image of Horatio's entrance into Archie's life being a baptism of sorts
And there you are being cleverer than I was. I just liked the idea of Archie invoking the start of their relationship all those years ago and seeing it as a decisive point in his life. But the baptism idea is neat, if coincidental. :)
That last line is interesting, too, as a reminder that even making it to the next morning is a fight that Archie's undertaking for Horatio.
Precisely. And at the risk of being obnoxiously self-referential, may I point out that Bush certainly agrees with you. Last line of my "Revelation" fic.